"Poison" (new song)

I'm not sure if these lyrics found me or if I found these lyrics.  In any case, here's the first part of a song I just stared working on today.  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=naX_6XMzcQY

Please let me know what you think of it by commenting on this post, leaving a comment on my Facebook and/or Twitter pages, or commenting on the video itself; it would absolutely make my day if you did.  And if you have any ideas for a second verse, let me know; I'm kind of stumped at the moment...

Much love,

~3Ni~